aw. that's so.. aw~ :]
thanks so much for this. oneshot? :P

Oh I like it! Definitely different kind of fiction but the way you set it up is just awesome. I get a little confused sometimes between the transitions but I think that's just me. And I don't even know what to expect because I have no idea where you're leading me which is very cool.

An amazing job, it really seemed like you were talking out of past experiences. Terrific, really, truly, terrific.

im crying literally its so sad

dang it...i cried reading this T.T
guess it's my fault for listening to sad songs while reading
anyways, this is a really beautiful, well-written one-shot i have ever read in a loong while. it's like i could feel wat she feels..how it's like to love someone but he never even noticed even a tiny bit of that love. just gotta say well done :D

this is an AMAZING STORY! but why does it have such a sad ending? plz dont tell me i just ends...like that?!?!?! ur an amazing writer this had me completely engrossed, u should publish short stories!
this is such a deep story! I LOVE IT!

Sad story. I just want to show this story to the dense boy so he would know how much she loves him.

Great one-shot :)

why does it have to have a sad ending? :(

SUPER SAD and EMO

i swear i woulda cried had i been at home, but NUOH im in the library. so eh. HAH. xp

Liked it loads

aw =[ I can't believe she never told him! Ughh guys are so stupid!

*raises pitches and forks*

That dense boy. Great story!

Oh my god this is so touching! I loved it! Great job!

that was just lovely. You might want to get a beta to fix a quite few grammar mistakes but the story itself is wonderful. Almost heart-breaking. Keep it up.

shit, sad love story, so so sad, but very beatiful.