Totally heartbreaking. Maybe in the end,they'll be together. Ok i'll just keep on thinking my version of the ending, but she totally got friendzoned there, that's what makes it more depressing;(

This is so, so incredibly sad. It seriously made me want to cry, and that must mean it's good, because there's no way something poorly written could do something like that to me. I only wish I could see the guy's response to her entries...

Baaaaaaaaaah. Shit, girl. I. LOVED. THIS. I felt happy and all 'aww' and then angry and then 'awwww' again until I just wanted to cry when I read the end. Jesus, woman. Talk about a whirlwind of emotions, eh? Anywho, so glad I read this. Keep it up, doll face. (;

I love it. Like really. So. So. So. Real. And cliched. All at the same time. :D

this made my heart wrench. beautifully written though!

Awesome story! When the reader decides that they really really want two characters together, means you did a good job! Bravo! Awwwww sad that she didn't get him! But that's reality I guess:)

I think this is very sad. I guess I can't expect everything I read to have a happy ending. But it sucks, I guess it is realistic. Not everything will be the way we want it. This is still very good.

you know how some stories pull at your heart strings? this is one of them.

I feel like running up to her, give her a long warm hug and tell her that with each fall you get a new lesson. A new tale.

What is a man with no tales to tell?

I think that the song "Men Of Snow" by Ingrid Michaelson goes along perfectly with this story's rythem.

"I told him all my sadness and my fear

And he just listened with a snowy ear

But when I came around the next day

My friend had gone and melted all away"

This story was amazingly written. There was so much emotion in it. You're really talented, thanks for sharing this.

super sad. but i love the way you wrote it.

My only reaction is to say... Wow!

Omg I love you. All your stories are so good! Gonna read the next one :)

Well let's hope that she finds someone, or that would be quite sad.

Love the story!

*Ngoc1231*

This story totally broke my heart into pieces... :'(

I was trying so hard not to cry, since my parents are sitting right across me. :D

Please continue writing such beautifully written, heartfelt stories. ;)