Sad story. I just want to show this story to the dense boy so he would know how much she loves him.

Great one-shot :)

why does it have to have a sad ending? :(

SUPER SAD and EMO

i swear i woulda cried had i been at home, but NUOH im in the library. so eh. HAH. xp

Liked it loads

aw [ I can't believe she never told him! Ughh guys are so stupid!

*raises pitches and forks*

That dense boy. Great story!

Oh my god this is so touching! I loved it! Great job!

that was just lovely. You might want to get a beta to fix a quite few grammar mistakes but the story itself is wonderful. Almost heart-breaking. Keep it up.

shit, sad love story, so so sad, but very beatiful.

This story or rather one-shot was beautifully written. I wish that it was an actual story and that she did leave and then they met again like 5 years later or something ( okay getting sidetracked). Excellent one-shot and I hope you write MANY more like it( or take my advice and turn it into a story, not this one-shot but a whole original story that's not so original, make sense? lol)

How sad, how touching. I really liked it, the story DRAWS you in, I swear it does. So awesome. I loved it. And I know you would appreciate a longer review, but I'm too sad to go think of one. Really, it's so... so... so... damn! I am too stupid to remember what I wanted to say, huh? Oh, moving. Right. That's what the story is. Moving.

I'm getting tears in my eyes here.

That was soo beautiful. And sad. Please tell me there's a continuation hidden somewhere... Or that you're working on it?

I beg. Really, I'm begging. This was that good.

And so depressing.

Why can't you just see, you idiot?

This was great. I'd even go as far as to say that it's your best one.

Thanks for a lovely read! )

It was heartbreaking. There's no happy ending for her? *puppy eyes*

that was really sad and depressing but at the same time sweet and well written. it was a good combo.

charlotte

Awe, this is one of the...not sad, but...heart warming-breaking stories I've probably ever read. I almost cried. Nice job, I loved it...-Chels