|Reviews for Who's Turn?|
| StarryKnight46 12/12/08 . chapter 1
Cutee. I swear I will like, push him at you if I have to.
Btw, you used the wrong form of "whose" :D
| skyward squidly squee 12/6/08 . chapter 1
Yea. The second stanza is confusing but makes sense. How could you both have known yet not know, though? The last line of that stanza is great, though. So true. :/. And the third stanza is great, too. I especially like the third line. Between the second, third, and fourth stanzas, though, it feels to me like you're repeating things and just rewording them a bit. The first two lines of the last stanza are a little, meh, to me. I don't know. But i really love the very last line, too. :D. It makes me feel, wow.