LOL. Great one-shot! :D I just had to review it :) HAHA.

For me, I really wanted Valerie to say yes, to have a happy ending and all. But the ending part sounds a bit like she's gonna say no :(

So what's the ending like? :D

Love the style, storyline :)
~bel

I really liked this one-shot. Although I would've liked if you put in her answer at the end :-). But I still thought your writing was very good!

awesome please continue!

It was quite good. but whats with the ending?? You cant end with, I opened my mouth to answer. so can you tell us what she answers with

I never get sick of reading this because it still touches me inside. I read this over and over at least once a week. Hahaha. You really should have an alternate ending. I always want something different to happen every time I read it. :) Great one-shot.

make alternate ending..please!
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This si really good even though I hate open ended stories but urs in one of the ones i like.

Continue! you so should.
I think she should say yes.
I also think, she should say no.
I won't really be entirely happy either way. I'm totally torn and probably will be forever and ever...and ever. ;)
But I still want you to post her answer. make an alternative ending. Ooh! you should make two! one where she says yes and one where she says no! then it can be three endings!
And yet...I still love how this story ends right now. ugh! so frustrating.
So don't change it.
No, change it.
Don't change it.
i don't know! I'll leave it up to you to write another ending. Or you could just tell me what you thought she should do. Yeah-I like THAT solution.
So-good job! I know, long review, but hey! You deserved it!

I think she said yes. Cuz as stupid as it iz I wood of. I am a hopeless romantic and even if wuz a @$$ he wasn't alwayz , people don't change we think they do but they don't. Gene is still the same boy she luved. She knos how bad he jacked her up, y wood she do dat back 2 him? Even if she's hurtin she iz not evil.

Plus I always want it 2 work out cuz even wid a 1shot I getz attatched 2 the characters & and I want them 2 b happy, happy joy, joy! I am very weird

Sincerly,
A Person With 2 Much Freetime and Is Desperately in Luv With a Moron

I h8 cinycal endings! I kno she shold not say yes but dude that is just so negative. I think she should say no then he doesn't give in and they all live happily eva afta.

Luv Ur oneshots

No matter how sweetly cliche it would be for her to accept I think she should leave him behind XD Or maybe not...lol I really don't know >< just so you know (which you obviously already do) this is a fantastic story!


xx

Please continue this--I can't help but feel that it didn't end well for Val and Grant with this ending; all open endings make me feel that way...I'm just weird like that. :) Later!!

I hope her answer would be along the lines "How stupid do you think I am?" Really. The jerk.
Because the cold facts in your story are in no way romantic or even socially acceptable, don't you agree? The guy in his pursue of popularity dumps his uncool girlfriend, does not look twice at her after that, gets into serious serial dating. Now, when he's finally out of high school and popularity does not matter anymore (it's different in college), he tries to sweet-talk himself back into poor lamb's knickers because she's indicated it could be possible with all that jeans wearing business. To the graduation, no less. Where is her sense of style?
As for the romantic crap he's sprouting, well, words are words, they don't cost much unless you happen to be J.K. Rowling, right?
Otherwise, wonderfully written story. Thank you for sharing it. :-)

Ah! One of the best one-shots I've read in a while. It's just extremely well written and it makes the underlying cliche drift in this story seem so original and fresh. And I kinda liked it how they didn't immediately kiss and jump all over each other at the end, because it's so much more realistic if they don't.

Keep on writing and I'll be reading ;)

I really liked this! It was cute and sweet, and the emotions and characters were so real. Amazing job. :)