this was a fantastic oneshot!
everything was so perfectly well paced
and the emotions were so real; all in all a wonderful read! thanks a lot :D

Okay, so I read the summary, and couldn't help it. This story looked too awesome to pass up. LOVE it!

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very unique.

i enjoyed this immensely.

towards the beginning the story was almost a bit choppy because I couldn't see the transition to a new moment in tim till i was already halfway into the next sentence, causing me to go back and re-read a few lines to make sure i knew where the characters were. maybe add a few sentences?

over all, a very very good read.

you never fail at getting me all emotional and to tears.

Way cool story. I loved it!

This is so ... excellent.

I would have paid to read this, definitely.

I fell in love with your characters, and your writing is so smooth and easy to follow; you pay just enough attention to detail without getting wrapped up in it. I'm in love with the brewing relationship, and I thank you for ending on such a positive note, haha, because I would have been sorry to see it happen any other way.

I love it!

It's amazing, and a new favorite [:

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Katie

Such a sweet story! :) Sorry for not saying more but I have to go and study for my final exams.

Omg, cutest ending ever. EVER. Thomas's character is so well developed, and we get to really like David. It's just a very different, very interesting setting. Love sports stories, and diving just gives so many sexy opportunities. And fit bodies. Loved it. It's perfect. And now I'm going to go read more of your stories!

Wonderful one-shot.

Really wonderful.

And kind of fluffy... ;)

This is cute, and the whole world-class-divers thing is nice and original and refreshing. Keep it up, I always look forward to reading your writing.

Hahaha... seriously the only reson i started watching the olympics was because of boudia and finchum. They made my inner fangirl sqee. If they aren't dating each other then I'm really a man. now that tht rant is out of the way... it made me sad (not hard to do right now... ever have times where everything seems to make you wanna cry?... they are weird) but the ending made me happy. You definitely established the characters, and I love this story!

O.O Aww that was sweet!

When I saw this, I was like WTF! Seriously. But really, pretty nice. I will never look at them the same again, but that's okay. Diving is a gay man's sport and we know it. LOL.

there was a lot of tangible angst in this-heavy, but not overly so, and that was good enough for me. there were moments where my fists clenched in sympathy for Thomas, so yeah. good.