Wow that was really good. haha I love sports stories and yes, there definitely needed a diving one to be done. I remember watching the Olympics this summer xD

well, well, well, if that doesn't get a dirty mind thinking.

but good. very good. i love them. they're adorable, of course.

In 1796, their mothers took home the gold on the three meter springboard in Montreal.

were there olympics in 1796? ... so these guys would be around 1800s?

good solid emotional development of thomas tho. )

Loved it !

Thanks for a great read,

Chantelle Chanilow

Woop!

And what a celebration that's going to be!

So cute. I loved this. :)

Absolutely adorable. I loved every word of it.

Gorgeously written! And I liked the topic especially.

xo

this was awesome and i love the summary. indeed, someone did have to do it.

Mm...divers... I loved this XD So emotional. And they were both such cuties! I love that last scene...it made me giggle (cuz I really am seven on the inside). It was really adorable.

This is REALLY good. Your writing really gets to my emotions, and I just had this uncontrollable delight in me when I finished this one-shot (and The Lighthouse). I really hope you continue writing. I do not particularly like sports, but by using sports your characters have a lot of trust in each other that you get to play with when feelings are tampered with and revealed. You seem to like unrequited loves (that are actually not that unrequited in the end). I adore stories like that and live off of them. Now I am even more excited for The Library.

Oh, I forgot: I loved this! ;)

OH MY GAWD, YES! I love you for doing this. So needed to be done and I love it. Fills me with glee. YAY!

Aw...it was adorable. It was a very cute idea, i've never seen a diving/swimming based shounen-ai story. I think you did an excellent job. I love the charcters too. :D

HE. This was LOVELY.

oh my gosh! this was so sweet!

i just had one problem, how were they diving in a hot tub? or was it a pool that was heated? because i was confused and thought that it was a new scene...

but it was adorable. C:

I really enjoyed this. I've always been impressed with people who can write one-shots because you have to do plot and character development in a limited amount of space. You managed to capture everything perfectly. I love the story. The characters were believable. I found myself empathizing with Thomas immediately, which was really cool. I liked the exchanges between Thomas and David; they were extremely realistic. I'm sure you could also make a multiple chapter story with these characters as well if you wanted to continue with them. I really liked them. All in all, a very good one-shot.