Hey, I never thought about it that way before (2 guys vs 1).
Anyways, cool story.

Well, I don't know about anybody else for certain, but I can confidently assert that bisexual girls also enjoy slash. I freakin' love the stuff. :D

This was adorable, and it combined my favorite things in the world: sweet gay boys (the best kind! Sweet gay boys for the win!), fluff, and CHOCOLATE!

Chocolate spoons sound interesting, but for a chocolate lover, I don't like milk chocolate much. It makes my teeth hurt. lol. Now, if there was such a thing as dark chocolate spoons, I'd swim an ocean to get them. :)

Great job with this your first posted slash. Kudos for awesomeness! ^_^

Yes this if freaking cute and original.
As a gay guy i liked it. Its nice to read some harmless Slash

Pretty dang cute, indeed. There's a subtle difference between normal romance and slash, and you seem to have it down. (Not that I've ever read much slash--the poorly-written, unrealistically horny ones always tend to scare me away.)
Osprey

Reading Slash IS a higher level of thinking. And just check out the Slash Fiction Forum; lesbians like it, too! As for harmless Slash. Well. I'm sure you know my stance on that.

This was adorable, though! And I don't think I've ever heard of chocolate spoons, but now I totally need to find one... You should definately write more stuff like this :D There is no such thing as too much fluff.

Nice.

I usually won't even read the very very short pieces, but I'm really glad I did. It'xs a really sweet slice of life, andI'd love to read more of them.

And yes, I think that there's a thing about abundance in the attraction straight men have to lesbian stories and straight women have to stories about gay men. Other things too, though.

That was very cute. I love chocolate, and I'm not a straight dude or a lesbian! xD

I wanted to squeal because of how cute it was.

You should make more slashy one-shots featuring them.

Good job.

- xo Juliet

You should defenitely attempt slash again becuase that was adorable. I loved Russ' non-hard-to-get thing.

Chocolate spoons? Why haven't i ever heard of them??
O_O And chocolate is a drug to me!!
~goes to dip spoons into melted chocolates~

Cute sweet story with adorable characters and fluffly filled plot... cocoa ~drools~

^ ^
Write on!

I don't now about you attempting Slash, but to me,k I tyhink this is a very very cute one-shot. It is certainly harmless and just easy to read.
I like this.
Narq.