I didn't get the the first line. What is the thing she has? The ambiguity confused me. I did like the piece though. The last three lines were especially sweet and well done. I've never heard of April being the cruelest though...

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I wanted to say that I disagree with the reviewer who said that the two "and"s disrupt the flow. I quite like it. I think it would have flowed nicer with a period after "window", but there's something refreshingly lovely to this simple, concise poem. Quite beautiful.

I didn't like starting both the last lines with And. It just messed up the flow to me. I did like the piece though. The whole no one wanting the person who wants them thing. I also like the ending though I think using punctuation to make that last line its own sentence might be nice. It just seemed like it should be a bit separate.

I wish you had put the A/N as part of the poem. Haha.

"The one she wants" is an awesome description of a friend's crush. I like it a lot. Very original, and clever.

"And they say life is beautiful" - this last line is haunting. I like it a lot as well.

I very much like your cute simple poetry. :) Very nice images that spur on the imagination altogether. Great job.

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I really liked it. :]
Very simple, but awesome.

Straight-forward. Honest. Beautiful.

So simple.
So true.

That's so annoying I know exactly what you mean!! Short and to the point, great job!
~fleur