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| Reviews for Cocky |
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   heal me forever 10/28/12 . chapter 1:) wow dat was good |
| Ngoc1231 2/19/12 . chapter 1 This was adorably cuteeee. It kinda concerns me when someone puts an emphasis on sexual preference but hey I guess this time it was just to make a point haha. Him being jealous at first was slightly annoying but I get it. It tied the story together really well. Loved the story! *Ngoc1231* |
| HayleeBailey 1/28/12 . chapter 1 So it was a play! AHH! Didn't see that one coming! At least I think it was... you said the curtain closed...- Oh well! It was brilliant, to say the least :) |
| The Weatherwitch 12/16/11 . chapter 1 aww cuteness :P very nice xD |
| blithe.serendipity 7/24/11 . chapter 1 I actually really like this. I think it was written really well! :) Thanks for writing, can't wait to read more from you. |
| urtenshii 1/1/11 . chapter 1 :) suuperrb ! that was nice ! and super cute, too! keep on writing ! |
| x Farii 5/30/10 . chapter 1 Baha(: I like :D |
| P.F Ally 5/6/10 . chapter 1 aww :D one of the cutest things i've ever read. though that doesn't say much :( but yeah LOVE IT |
| Virginia T. Beth 2/19/10 . chapter 1 I really did like it. It was insanely cute, which is nice. I also got sucked in at the very beginning- also a plus. However there were a few minor spelling errors that irked me. You used 'there' when it should have been 'their'. You also used 'then' when it should have been 'than' multiple times. I also noticed a couple other little typos here and there. Great story, though! |
| windyday 1/17/10 . chapter 1 Cute story. Maybe too cute. I liked the characters and how you portrayed them, especially Kye, but she didn't seem to have any flaws at all. And I didn't see all that much cockiness from Braden, which I suppose was rather nice too, but I didn't feel any character development. And, finally, there really was no problem in the story. No "moment of truth" or conflict resolution. It felt a little flat is all. I didn't really get to know them well enough to be strongly affected by their happy ending. However, I really appreciated your relative lack of grammar and spelling issues, and I enjoyed the witty and original beginning immensely. :). Keep writing! |
| SnoQueen 1/6/10 . chapter 1 Heyy... ..This was a cute story...it had a nice sequence to it...although it could've had a bit more...hmm...drama to it? But I do like it the way it is... Keep it up! SnoQueen |
| Katie Valentine 12/23/09 . chapter 1 It's sweet. :D |
| Beautiful Destination 12/22/09 . chapter 1 Love this story! So cute :) |
| Hopelessly Cliche 12/22/09 . chapter 1 This is great! I love the fact that we read it from a male's perspective! :) |
| ghurl00 12/22/09 . chapter 1 That so cute!) Well done!) |
