awesum

so god!

Hey!
I really enjoyed this one! It was written well, and the plot was simple and cute!
Although I'm curious as to what happens with Asha and her father, I do agree with you...
Jayden is such a gentleman...:) I loved Ashton's character!!

Waiting for anymore installments!
SnoQueen

it feels like it was cut short!!
no...
but still, i loved it!!

Great story :)
I thought you ended it well, even if you don't have a forgive-cheating-douche part; oh well, who cares about that, the dads a jerk anyway
Though there is that one part how Jayden's being "used" but Asha, it would be nice f that got cleared up
Other then that I loved everything

h;ilk

Love this! I say defiantly for an epilogue!!

Fantastic.! Right another one

Yes for the epilogue. And I still think that Maria should have left him... and I'm glad Asha didn't let him take over her life :)

Gup

What? That's it?

Hey, I just finished your story.
It was a delight. You made me actually laugh out loud in places. :) And your characters are to cute. I actually agree with the no resolution about the father thing, he doesn't/didn't deserve that right. He KNEW she existed before she walked into that house, had even seen her, so it's not like she wasn't real to him or anything. So, yeah. That's what I think about that. :-P
Anyway, an epilogue would be awesome! Maybe something after a finalized divorce between Maria and the scumbag? *looks hopeful* Okay, maybe not. :(
Anyway, you story was delightful, and I really appreciated the explanation of some of the less common chat-speak.

! :D I LOVE ALL OF UR STORIES!! :D
lol. i read all of ur Romance genre stories. and they are just beautiful! :D

you should definitely make an epilogue to this story

i like it. but i think its not-so-happy-ending or something. :)

I loved it! Even though the father was a totally crazy maniac x_x The pace of the story felt pretty fast, but I liked it overall, kept it really suspenseful. I look forward to reading more of your writing :D