Totally agree with u on the 'not forgiving dad' thing , u could have tied up a few loose ends here there but it doesn't matter that much sooo...good story!

I knew it :D well I guess its kinda sad too but...ya know

I KNEW IT

This just turned into metafiction!

I find them to be the lowest form of scum. No siree, no forgiveness from me!
TOTALLY MY VIEW DEAR I ACCEPT ANYTHING EXCEPT CHEATING BASTARD

great stry maybe a stry for ashton ? violet MAYBE

love asha/ashton/ashley ofcourse jayden...nd lydia nd violet also had good parts ..:)

Awwww. That was really nice. I LOVE ASHTON! :") HIHIHI!

Time to do my homework. :D

I LOVE Ashton. :))

loved it :D especially the part where you did't drag it on and on and on and on .. ;)

Oh HELL yes, I loved the way that ended!

i really liked it! :)

Loved it 3 awesome storyy 33 the only thing i didn't like tbh is the way that Jayden told his life story .. in a food court and i did think that was a bit out of the blue, but on the whole i loved every minute of it tbh 3

Omg I love this story! An epilogue would be awesome just to have that closure that you'll know what happened to them but ion the end it's totally up to you! :) thanks fold the awesome story!

Awesome story. Awesome plot too. Could have been cliched and boring but you made it interesting and funny instead. Loved all of the characters. Ashton is hilarious and if I had an older brother I'd want him to be just like Ashton. Asha is really likable and reminded me a lot of myself (minus the text message language). Jayden was everything a person could want in a boyfriend- hot, caring, and fun to be around. I liked the part with Violet where Asha takes the time to see past her facade of self confidence and encourage her. It was nice to see a story where the mean girls who go around flaunting their assets weren't all portrayed as evil she-demons from hell. Some (well most) of them are, but there are a lot of them that are that way because they are insecure and trying to get guys to notice them and I'm glad to see that someone else sees that. I also liked that they weren't enemies anymore but didn't immediately become best friend. That happens a lot in stories and its completely unrealistic. I'm glad that you didn't have Asha make up with her dad. I'm all for forgivness and everything like that, but that guy was a major jerk, and forgiveness doesn't mean you have to put up with the person mistreating you if they're still a jerk. I'm happy that Asha gave him a good talking-to cause he needed it. As for an epilogue, hell yes. This was one of the best stories I have ever read (and I've read a lot) and I really want another glimpse into the lives of these charcters. On that note, PLEASE write a sequal. With Ashton or the girl who becomes his girlfriend as the main character? It would be r eally cool to see him get a girlfriend because he deserves one. Plus a sequal would have the bonus of getting to see more of Asha and Jayden. All in all this story was very realistic and I absolutely loved it.

please do write an ending :D it has such a good story plot, ending it like that feels a bit incomplete :( or maybe its just cuz im a sucker for all-round happy ending X)

i love the line " we are conducting our own chemistry experiment" ahh, i will never forget that XD

hey...

i just finished reading your 2 stories-complications and devil take it all..loved both of them.

Complications involves a serious issue but you have put the humour very nicely into it...simply loved the characters and the plot. and in case you decide to write the epilogue i would really love to read it!

Devil take it all is fun...i was hung on to the story through out...though i would have liked to read chad's POV.

looking forward to reading 'bet you can't'..!:)