so sad, but wonderful...please keep writing

i can see why she's confused... keep writing!
-Silvermoon

Not too bad, the beginning was fantastic, the end was surprising...I kinda thought they might be in university.

OO! Sounds interesting so far, kinda strange twist at the end of the chapter, for some reason I was thinking this 'peter' might be Alice's brother who Alice doesn't know about.

dah dah dahn. great chap. cant wait for more!
-Silvermoon

Oh, lucky... you gotta write a novel for school. ^^
This story seems really interesting. It's well written, and the description is great. I love the suspense at the end, and now you need to update soon because I want to know what happens next! :D