love this story so far!

cant wait for moer
who know maybe charlies dad might suddenly be supportive of charlie and kade because he might see it as a way of getting charlie back into law

Do you have the rest of this story planned out?

-Read You Later

Weird. My first name and middle name is in this story.

Wow, I'm so interested to know what has Charlie on the defence. I mean shouldn't she love her father?

this is going to be so interesting
I cant wait for more

Very INteresting... ;) Read your other story, and LOVED it! Hope you start the sequel soon! How about for a Christmas present? This first chappie already has me hooked :P

I already love this story, Charlie seems like an awesome person :) can't wait for the next chapter.

Indijana

The plot is really intriguing! I liked it a lot. I'll definitely tune in for the next chapter, but there were a lot of typos and grammatical errors that were pretty distracting. Some of the phrasing was a little awkward as well. Nothing some good proof reading (by yourself, or by a beta) can't fix! Overall, great job! :)

good start...im very interested in whats going to happen with charlie and the rest of her family as well as Kade =)...can't wait till the next chapter!

Good Start, look forward to the next chapter

I am totally hooked so far. I am excited to see where you take the characters and what happened in the past with Charlie and her dad.

it was good watch your spelling on some parts like the last sentence should be he's not he'd but it's a good story. (=^.^=)