This had passion. I could here the song sung in my head. At the end I had suddenly felt the need to give you a hug. Though on the (1st short bridge) the verses 7-9 just didn't seem to follow or...was it fit nicely? Other than that the overall song was fabulous.

It certainly is very long. Was this the song you said you were editing that was over 2 pgs. long? It was very good in all concerns. Bravo!

wow wow wow very long

but i like it