|Reviews for Capitals|
| dragonflydreamer 12/28/08 . chapter 1
Syllables look good to me :)
I love your use of formatting. Very interesting and eye-catching for such a short piece.
I also like that this has a contrast in it. I believe that's a requirement of a real hiaku, which people tend to forget on this site.
Nice work :)
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| Dale Christopher 12/11/08 . chapter 1
Clever. I like the subject, you don't often hear from the person being yelled at from an online perspective. The syllables seem fine.
| Doxology 12/7/08 . chapter 1
I had fun counting the syllables :) Great haiku.
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