 CamilleBelle 2009-01-02 . chapter 5Ahahahaha, this was freaking great as, and super original!
Seriously, it was so good, and I loved reading it because I'd never read anything like it before.
Really good work! |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-12-30 . chapter 5This was such a funny one! Roasting chest hairs over an open fire. Woah. And in front of a mall too! :P |
 artistic dreamer 2008-12-26 . chapter 4aww this was very sweet...naming all the things that he/she?? did. but it was sorta sad though, made me a bit teary eyed, but still very cute. i especially liked the quadratic formula song, that's funny does that seriously exist? i hope you had a merry christmas!! and a happy new year!!
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 CamilleBelle 2008-12-25 . chapter 4Wow this was amazing, and completely heartbreaking!
That was so sad, they sounded perfect together, the poor girl!
But good writing. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-12-25 . chapter 4This was so gorgeous...I loved the second person pov. I'm going to interpret it as if he died, because that makes it so much more powerful. Is that what you intended?
Anyway, beautiful. Update soon! |
 Cookie Jar 2008-12-25 . chapter 1Hehe, this is very nice - I like! |
 toffeecakesxox. 2008-12-21 . chapter 2Oh-so-very-sad. But, it realy captures the short relationships of certain high school students, no matter how perfect they are for each other.
-toffeecakesxox. |
 toffeecakesxox. 2008-12-21 . chapter 1This is so better than my klutzish story! AH! -squeal!-
Dalton and Lisa and Asianness! I am so freakin proud to be Asian (3/4 Filipino and 1/4 CHINESE, w00t!)
Those two are so CAH-UTE! |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-12-19 . chapter 3I officially LOVE the cheese monster!!
So adorable...:) |
 artistic dreamer 2008-12-19 . chapter 3aw how adorable! it's true, the best presents don't cost anything. though at some points in the story, i got confused who was the girl and who was the guy, i sorta figured it out by the last couple lines. this is so cute. and even though the guy spent all his money and have no money for a present which is so not cool, it's so romantic and sweet what he was able to come out with the bestest present ever! loved it from the beginning to the end. the dialogue way of writing makes the oneshot seem so simple and sweet. i enjoyed it very much! :D
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 CamilleBelle 2008-12-19 . chapter 3This was gorgeous and I freaking loved it.
Maybe a little hard to follow who was speaking at times,
but in general it was brilliant.
It was really sweet, and a nice Christmassy story. |
 CamilleBelle 2008-12-17 . chapter 2Ahh, this was heaps sad.
Although it was very good.
Your writing just flows, it's beautiful. |
 this is the life 2008-12-16 . chapter 2no.. that was sad. they're supposed to make up then make out. but i still like it. |
 artistic dreamer 2008-12-15 . chapter 2this one wasn't as cute..but it was still good, in a different sorta way, but i always like happy endings :D but i like the last sentence...not such thing as a perfect couple. :D very nicely written, but i'm hoping for more fluffy cute ones with happy endings to come! :D |
 crystalpen 2008-12-15 . chapter 2Hahaha |