I'm going to favorite this story anyways because I have hope that it will come back from the clutches of writer's block. The beginning is soooo great! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!1

Man,talk about drama...i like it!

I'm in love with this story. Please, I beg of you PLEASE Continue.

you just don't understand how much i love this story.

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A really interesting beginning.

I can tell something good is going to come out of this.

It seems you have not updated in a while, but I do hope you get the chance to do so. This story has so much potential and I am only wondering what Mark has really done.

Great development in the story and the characters. I can see that I can learn a lot from your writing.

Drama and lots of it love update soon:)

omgee! why are you not updating? I don't care if I am am the only reviewer this story is too good to end! I need to find out what monique is going to do and what is mark's reaction please please please please please finish this story. when I am looking through my searches I find this story and read these 2 chapters over and over again. I am ready for more please,(I'm begging you!), please update and finish this story.

from a huge fan

-Norma Bu.

Whoa! Family drama. That's one crazy Christmas. I wonder if Mark really is cheating on Monique or if its all a big misunderstanding.

I definitely don't like Marks family.

Such family drama. Interesting indeed. Keep on.

It has begun.

thanks for the update.

Interesting so far. Great family dynamics.

OH i'M INTERSTED

Worried about Monique. She seems like she's gonna crack any moment here.

Maybe Darcy needs to spend more time with her kids than at the mall. Just a thought.

Thanks for the update. Interested to see how this story goes.