I really liked the fanfiction. It's really sweet. And I love the actual story too. Keep it up. ;D

Yes! I was right. I guessed he was in an accident, but wasn't certain. Wonderful writing...;)

Lavender Quill

(this is my new name... my old one was admiral realson)

Interesting story... I'm off to read the next chapter...

this is interesting can't wait to see where you take it update soon :D