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Isca 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
"Meant for dreaming and dying." Wow. That's so sorrowful!

"Never let you alone in a room again." That line is very striking.

"I'm busy looking at the woman whose husband didn't make it." Brilliant!
fatbird33 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
terribly sad, but well written.
Eva Pomerance 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
This poem is //wonderful//...so sad and beautiful.
I particularly like the imagery: "The wind in your/memories/becoming cold and swollen in my coffee.
Have you uncapitalized "I" for a reason?
Thank you for writing this. This is definitely a break from most other writing I see.
softersin 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
Heartbreaking.
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