|Reviews for Limbo|
| simpleplan13 1/23/09 . chapter 1
"my limbo is every thing about you"... everything
"No matter how much I bath,"...bathe
I love the line about the white flag. That was a really unique and interesting image. The way you described the limbo was a bit boring and not as good as I know you can write. I do like the bathing part though... that was interesting.
| burning in effigy 1/18/09 . chapter 1
you've managed to create that flow that songs have, and the lyrics are meaningful (much better than some of the music on the radio these days)
really liked: "No matter how much I fight,/I lose anyway… But/the white flag stains itself with red." really nice imagery. sad but symbolic
very nice job on this!
(and thank you for your reviews from a while ago)
| Natalie-Rayne 12/15/08 . chapter 1
I really like the part
"No matter how much I run,
in the end I return here,
this place I disklike."
| Eminie 12/11/08 . chapter 1
Very poignant song, that's really true. It's part of life.
| The Reverse Edge Blade 12/9/08 . chapter 1
I liked this song! It had a nice messge, and it was written with sentences that made it easy to pick a melody. The line "Wait, it's always dirtier" was a little hard to put into the melody, for it stood a little out with the "wait" part. But other than that, it flowed really well!
A nice song! Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| Erlkoenigin 12/9/08 . chapter 1
A great poem! Reminds me of Dante. The repetitions are impressive.
Limbo is the part of the part of hell, where the “good pagans” are staying, right?
| Isca 12/9/08 . chapter 1
I liked the repetition of the words "I'm caught." It really gave the song a 'hopeless' tone that worked really well.