"my limbo is every thing about you"... everything

"No matter how much I bath,"...bathe

I love the line about the white flag. That was a really unique and interesting image. The way you described the limbo was a bit boring and not as good as I know you can write. I do like the bathing part though... that was interesting.

you've managed to create that flow that songs have, and the lyrics are meaningful (much better than some of the music on the radio these days)

really liked: "No matter how much I fight,/I lose anyway… But/the white flag stains itself with red." really nice imagery. sad but symbolic

very nice job on this!

(and thank you for your reviews from a while ago)

I really like the part

"No matter how much I run,

in the end I return here,

this place I disklike."

Very poignant song, that's really true. It's part of life.

I liked this song! It had a nice messge, and it was written with sentences that made it easy to pick a melody. The line "Wait, it's always dirtier" was a little hard to put into the melody, for it stood a little out with the "wait" part. But other than that, it flowed really well!

A nice song! Keep at it!

The Reverse Edge Blade

A great poem! Reminds me of Dante. The repetitions are impressive.

Limbo is the part of the part of hell, where the “good pagans” are staying, right?

I liked the repetition of the words "I'm caught." It really gave the song a 'hopeless' tone that worked really well.