i love that you changed up "windows to the soul"

even if your version is still gushingly semi-cliche. :)

and i loved the

"un

tangled"

because it was lovely format and just summed up

the suckiness of unrequited love pretty darn well. (:

Beautiful. I loved the line "what's killing me is too busy dying to notice that he's shooting holes in my soul everyday of out lives". It was dramatically worded.)