I liked the emotion you conveyed in this short piece. The dynamic between the characters is powerful, though incomplete. I feel perhaps it could be expanded to a story because as is it leaves alot of questions unanswered.

Take a second look at the punctuation around your dialogue. Some words are capitalized when they shouldn't be.

I hope this feedback helps.
Nicki :P

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It was really short, but I think it was the perfect length for a story like this. It was excellently written, with just enough emotion. I had to read it twice to fully understand it, but I enjoyed it. :)

Made me think about my parents. Separated. *sigh*

It's a simple, nice short story. I liked it. =)