|Reviews for Like two fireflies|
| simpleplan13 12/29/08 . chapter 1
I like this. The repetition works really well as does the italics of it. The piece is really great and bittersweet.
| Scarlett Wynter 12/27/08 . chapter 1
Oh! I love the image of two little fireflies dancing and flying with each other against the dark night sky. D
| i am Not a Poet 12/25/08 . chapter 1
Wow, fantastic. It's like a song, (actually, it may very well be, I don't think I looked to see) and I loved how you accented the chorus and added a line each time. It was beautiful in the presentation and the whole idea of two fireflies is lovely. Excellent imagery and thoughts behind it, excellent job!
| Averybarbarian 12/16/08 . chapter 1
"With our shallow issues/and forced smiles,/we can avoid talking/about what we really feel/since nobody cares." Such powerfull lines and great imagery as well. Your piece flowed smootly but the point was still maintained and not disturbed. Well done!
| Natalie-Rayne 12/15/08 . chapter 1
This might be my favorite of all your songs and poems. I really like the chorus.
| Living Life Free 12/12/08 . chapter 1
This is great, as always, i love it.
| AStrangerToYou 12/10/08 . chapter 1
Lovely. "Like two fireflies". I love that, and the whole idea of the poem.
| Erlkoenigin 12/10/08 . chapter 1
“With our shallow issues and forced smiles, we can avoid talking about what we really feel since nobody cares” is great! Like all of your poems this is a song.
| Calicien 12/10/08 . chapter 1
Very cute. I like fireflies. And I like the way you added lines to the italicized stanza. )