that is a really scary poem(?) but it was well written. i'd like for u to pay more attention to the punctuation and stuff. thanks for the read :)

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"of not knowing where i can and cannot start"

beautiful. you have a wonderful way with words.

beautifully written.

flawless; as always

xox

I loved your poem. I hear alot of myself in there. I really do know what it is like to FEEL TOO MUCH. I have learned the past few years that I am not in charge. There is much more going on than I know and a larger picture to see, but not yet!

I hope one day you will too. But not yet!

God Bless

Wonderfully written.

i can feel the emotion and it runs in the veins of this poem.

it feels so cathartic in a way; trapped, but releasing? I enjoyed it. great job! :)

Sad but really good :) And the title works really well, that was what made me read it.