   tonight we bloom 2009-11-28 . chapter 1beautifully written. |
 The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2009-02-12 . chapter 1flawless; as always
xox |
 Essence of the dawn 2008-12-31 . chapter 1I loved your poem. I hear alot of myself in there. I really do know what it is like to FEEL TOO MUCH. I have learned the past few years that I am not in charge. There is much more going on than I know and a larger picture to see, but not yet!
I hope one day you will too. But not yet!
God Bless |
 Mourning Sickness 2008-12-19 . chapter 1Wonderfully written. |
 with.You.in.mind 2008-12-11 . chapter 1 i can feel the emotion and it runs in the veins of this poem.
it feels so cathartic in a way; trapped, but releasing? I enjoyed it. great job! :) |
 AStrangerToYou 2008-12-10 . chapter 1Sad but really good :) And the title works really well, that was what made me read it. |
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