Aww, that was really kinda cute. haha Logan is pretty funny when he has to deal with Holly being all perky, but Holly seems really sweet. I hope you post the second part to this, it just doesn't feel complete as a one-shot.

An entertaining read, but I think it would benefit a lot from the second part.

I feel that Holly was pretty well developed, but Logan seemed like a somewhat weak character.

but I still really enjoyed this anyway.

pretty cute!

part the second please!

i think u should not just "add another part" but make a full-fledged story out of it.

*chants* More more more more more more...

Haha, but seriously, the second part would be a good add on!

(Please)

This is very cute! It brought a smile to my face, and I hope you will continue with it. Also, I love the title. Great job :)

yes! second part!

This was so cute! I'd love to see a mini-series with this couple. Great job. Thanks for posting!

POST ANOTHER PART! D