Wow, I like it, very good, then again, I say that like almost all the time...what ever

Nice story so far. However, there are some grammatical errors. But, grammatical errors are common when one is writing, and are essentially meaningless unless they ruin the story. However, the story does flow a little choppy, so I would look into making it flow better. Maybe by linking the ideas better. (?) Anyhow, good story. I would like to read more, so post soon! Good job restarting your story again! It can be quite hard to do so!

Not awful, I like it! Same goes to the poem! I can't waite to read more from you, so update FAST! :)

wow-ee, I really liked it, and I can't believe know one has reviwed, because, sure enogh, this is a really good story. I can't wait to read what happens next :)