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tangledwebweweave 2008-12-11 . chapter 1
I think I have a poem titled this, lol.

Kinda repetitive, but I like the idea. It seems like a spoken poem. Good job.
Kaiai 2008-12-10 . chapter 1
That was really good. I really enjoyed reading it. The moon does heal and it works in mysterious ways. However the sun does too. The sun burns but it also brings life.

Your poem was really good.

Kaiai
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