Very visual and descriptive. Some excellent lines as well, like the first two lines of the fourth stanza. This connects with the reader, because nearly everyone knows such a person, and how they affect you. Good write. MD:77.

I do too.


lovely job on this, it's very heartfelt.

I know the feeling... you've captured it perfectly, like a pause.

it's pretty i like the whole metaphor of prince charming and sleeping beauty.