I liked this story.It was quite short though,but the meaning behind it got through and I find it a very sweet one.I liked how the story developed very nicely from the beginning to the end.There were some grammatical errors,but that was the only flaws in this story.

Oh,one thing I didn't get was why the first sentence of this story started with 'and'? O_O...

aw...that's so sweet! i love it =] it gives you just enough information to tell you what you need to know, and then leaves the rest to your imagination, like are they in love?

the only part i didn't really like too much was the paragraph where he asks her if she likes to sing. i realize why it's there, because it makes sense at the end of the story, but it seems a little awkward and out of place. just me.

adorable story though =]