Nice rhyme scheme. Good luck x

dont think too long. Trust me. These things have a time limit, and if you dont act at just the right moment, it wont matter what you do. The choice is yours though :) and I know you will make the right one.

I really like the flow of this one. The rhyme scheme is very good, and not over emphasized. I like the self-rhetorical questions too, it is very fun to read.