hey..that was strong and intense and i didnty read it i felt it and i liked it..ur good..i hope to read more of ur writings

Wow you're an incredible writer.

Woah!

Beautifully done, I totally felt her pain and anger and disgust and everything. Fantastically conveyed. Loved: 'You look so vulnerable, more boy than man in that moment, and I cannot help myself.' I loved the style of it and the ending, so satisfying XD

That was amazingly written! I love your heroine!

I'm sick of all those stupid cheaters and worse! The girls who take them back! This restored my faith that girls can be independent and won't die when they lose their man.

Oh, this is great. Really great.

you are a wonderful writer... my heart always seems to be beating when ever i read one of your pieces...

I liked your story. It's actually hard to find good writing on even though there are so many stories to read from. You write incredibly well and I was amazed that there were hardly any grammar mistakes. Maybe you can write a longer story with chapters, if you are not already doing so. Hope this was helpful and keep on writing because you really have talent with a pen or a computer- whichever you use.

I didn't know I'd enjoy another cynical romance one-shot.

But this I certainly did. Great job.

I think this was pretty well written. You described the emotions fantastically and even though there weren't any names involved, it still felt personal and deep.

Nice job.

Wow.

Such powerful writing. Best thing I've read in a long time!

**yeah! ** yeah man, pssh.
Yeah... That'sallIcansay. High fives all around.
KUDOZ! Manymany.

Indeed... that was pretty awesome there, I liked it... but I wanna see a story written from male perspective on a cheating experience.

I loved it.The emotion is so raw.You can't find writing like that in to many places.

this story reminds me of my bf
he cheated on me and i knew how the woman in ur story felt
u described everything beautifully and i loved the ending
i so would do the same thing if i actually were brave enough
but overall the story is amazing and i loved it!
Cheers to u!!

I loved it! Oh my goodness, I even teared at the end of it!

The way you wrote it was definately different, and this experiment shows that even in a different writing style, it's still good to read!