Yeah this poem seems overindulgent and needlessly complex. I get that you're trying to play with the "academia" angle but to me it just seems pretentious (which maybe is what you're going for). And the phrase "crystalline uniqueness" put me off entirely.

But I really do love the line "We're all right in our distinctions of the world". Profound, simple and to the point. Also the first line paints a lovely picture.

Personally, I think there were too many big words. They stopped the flow of the piece and, until I had looked them all up, I obviously didn't understand it until I had done so. Once I had, though, it was strangely beautiful. Capturing my attention with words that painted a clear picture.

I thank you for teaching me something new. Algorithm is an awesome word.

there are too many complex words for such a short piece. sometimes simple is better. keep writing.