Your little haikus are so wonderful. I love this.

konnichi wa

I did not love the second and third (though I liked them), but that first - WOW. WONDERFUL! Almost mournful, though not in the way I normally read them. I just... t'was delicious. ;)

Ha det
-Shan-

I love the verse 2, good poem.

This is fantastic! The tone is so sad and I loved the musical analogy. Very well written, I loved it.