I liked the repetition in this one. I like poems that have repetition or descriptive words or rhyming and you are very good at all of those.

wow, my favorite part was the 'dont sing my sorries, don't pour on the apologies'

great job :)

Oh 'tis sorrowfull but a lovely piece. One can almost hear the music flowing with it. Lovely piece I turly enjoyed it well done!