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Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-12-11 . chapter 1
That was sad...I felt bittersweetness, definitely, and some regret sprinkled in their. Really good job. :)
Leave The Air 2008-12-11 . chapter 1
"I am nobody."
Haha.
What an awful thing to say.

I enjoyed it. :]
DeepSixing 2008-12-11 . chapter 1
I really really liked this. The only suggestion I would have is perhaps some way of implying the ages of Shermain and Hunter. For most of the story, I thought Shermain was an old woman with Alzheimer's and Hunter was her young grandson.

Great writing, though. I loved it!
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