This is really good, I enjoyed reading it. The bold letters left me a bit confused though. Do they spell out something?
I would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot!

Ever delicious. I love your poetry, especially when it's personal, and this was the most amazingly rad metaphor ever.

I like the use of the bold letters to spell it out.
Cos people that haven't read your stuff before might not get it.

Wonderful! (:

"the rest of the garden" - is only six syllables, not seven.

But I really like this piece! I enjoy writing poems in haiku forms too. :) Great job. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

This is brilliant. :) I really really liked it.
What's the significance of the bold letters? I liked how they kept the beat going visually. (I must sound like such a geek)

Haha. Anyway, well done. :)
I'm off to check more of your stuff.

I loved it. :]
And flowers are my favorite subject.
Haha. Great job.