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I love how you say "rain and life" as if it were nothing, because it shows you how the metaphor is nothing to be dramatized; it just -is-. I also like how you contrast snow and rain; it symbolizes the 'cold' and the 'warm' times really well. Amazing poem!

-DV-

Wow, that was simple! Okay, I actually got something from this...I think. WIth everything we do, a new chance arrives, throwing us into a new season of adventure. I say "new" because a snowflake is never the same as another. Yeah, simplicity can sometimes be the best thing, as everyone can gain their own meaning from it...

~SD

I really liked this. It's simply portrayed with some elegant, picturesque imagery. I love the word-choice... "dance" "rain" and "life" are like a template for a generic poem, but you have formulated an original, very light-hearted one all within the constrictions of a haiku. Good job.

I can think of nothing to change...

Anyways, keep up the good work.

- Silence.

PS. Did you take down and re-post 'Softly Strumming His Guitar' I could've sworn I'd reviewed it before...? =]

I like this, it's simple and clever, like a haiku should be. I love the imagery and the words in this are some of my favorites. Nicely done.

Peace, Daze

aww, i like this one =] i like the wording of it because it puts this peaceful image in your head =]]

also, to me, it seems to say that bad things will happen as well as the good, but if you keep a positive attitude, it will always get better

very nice! simple, yet deep =]