Ahaha I love his voice, it's amazing. xD

Okay, I'm sorry, but when they start bantering with "wifey", "hubby", and "for the lulz" I was freaked out, considering that's how me and my friend Timmy talk to each other. xD (Not sure when we were married, but now we apparently have children...and grandchildren. And I think he's got a boyfriend without a Y-chromosome named Rosa. She's a lesbian. O_o)

This is a really cute story. :P

If I was a Pokemon, my sound would be WIN and I'd shout at you over and over. :D

the style this is written in is bold--in the face of the reader. as a writer AND a reader, i can appreciate that. ::laughs:: i'm interested, yeah.

lol the two writers seem pretty interesting, i never thought about the writers actually getting..."worked up" about fanfictions...

This is really cute. I hope you work on this some more. I don't think you need to have a specific plan with this. Just let it go where it wants to go.

It's adorable...really.

- xo Juliet

I love this story.

I want to eat this story.

I want to...
Make a fanfic about this story.

Oh, I went there.

Wow... i acually wasnt gunna read this... but then i started anyways... and its REALLY good... i would love to know what happens to the protagonist.

WTF.
They changed the buttons, so I accidentally favourited it.
N-not that I wouldn't! I--er...that came out bad. xc Forgive me~

ANYWAYS.
I -love- it (of course. Jeeze).
And, -hem-, -you- may have no idea where you're going but atleast you'll be able to input a decent amount of chapters. =~=;;
Unlike myself...who never seems to get past chapter TWO.

I HAVE FAITH IN YOU.

Hwll you could leave it at this and I'd re read it. Sounds fuckin sweet. More or not, I applaud.

Everything I just read is so true! Your writing-style is great, makes one really long for more! I'd really like it if you'd consume one (or more) of my productions... XD And maybe, if you like my style, maybe we can work together? Its something I'm hooked up to. Writing a story together with someone else, like my (and Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity's) story Angel&Devil, and soon-to-be story of Sebastian Osprey and I. Believe me, it improves the writing and you get to get idea's you usually wont have! OMG I'm rambling, better stop before you fall asleep... Anyway, check out my stories too, if I go by the opinion of my readers, they're worth reading.
Grtz Silencia
ps: hope you like this review...XD

Sounds interesting so far, hope to see more soon. :]