I love this, the mix of love and destruction. It's quite lovely. ) Peace.

Sehr traurig, aber gut beobachtet und umgestzt

I like it, as usual! You write good stuff, kloun mannequin! Keep it up!

wow. I really REALLY liked this one! I love how you ended it! I loved it when it said: Let's ride this misfortune until we reach the flames, and burn each other.

'Tis quite interesting and flows very well one can almost hear the music in it. It has some great imagery to it like the lines "Let’s ride this misfortune/until we reach the flames/and burn each other" Quite powerfull words. Well done! I truly enjoyed it )