 Stardrag 2009-01-18 . chapter 1Where fantasies breathe...beautiful line dude...are you a dude...doesn't matter right? This felt like a guide-line for me, since all of these are the backbone of the races found within your everyday story, giving it the breath of life and letting us move forward with our dreams! Especially your invite, making others follow you in!
~SD |
 Dale Christopher 2008-12-15 . chapter 1This is really wonderful. I love the theme and I love fantasy. When I was younger I used to really be into dragons and wizards. I used to have a picture of a big blue dragon perched on a castle on my wall, as well as one with a wizard holding his staff to the sky. I read fantasy books and I couldn’t get enough of that world. I sort of grew out of it as I got older, but every now and then I venture back and this, your poem here, is like an invitation to do so. It’s also worded very cleverly, and I dig the last stanza. It’s really quite amazing. Hopefully I’ll dream of dragons and wizards tonight.
Peace, Daze |