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Reviews For: Devastation Down My Eyes
Sexy Vampirechick 2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Very sad!I liked the idea of using nature (the sea,the wind,the ocean and the earthquakes)to describe it all.It was really interesting.The only thing I disliked was that at the beginning of the poem the lines were very long and in the end it was really short,short to even one word.
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