Great ending, loved the line "The only reason that you're with me is because you think that I'll make a good snack one day".

i like that the girl ended it- and quite well too.

much MUCH better than if al would have ended it.

n the girl gets to choose her life-not the guy.

i like that.

plus, it's not the al-around vamp story either...

Hehe. "He had honestly thought that she was above using such stereotypes." Rofl. But poor Alphonse. Anyway, this was a cool story. Good job.

Hey,

This story was great. I loved this line

"Alphonse could understand that. He fell in love every time he looked in the mirror"

Nice twist on the typical plot. There should be sequel or a prequel.

ohh cruel.

pretty, though.