So, I've been reading your other story (Dead or Alive) and I really liked it so I was hesitant to read anything else by you because usually I only like one piece of an author's work, but I like this :) Yay!
I really liked this line:
I pulled that burning rage away from his too warm body and held it in a secret place inside myself, where he could never reach it.
Some fantastic fantasticness, there.