And then I screamed 'OMG! DID YOU MISS ME?!' :)

Oh, I bet this is fun. I'm gonna go to bed. I will return tomorrow, promise!

Catch ya.

You just need to give it some TLC, yeah? No more using the baseball bat, okay? :)

Bless. That should be your new years resolution - make peace with the stove.

:) Lemmie guess; You're about as lost in a kitchen as I am?

Raise your hand is you agree! Wow, that's allota hands...

Oh, I like this. I like the whole thing! I think it's brilliant, and so many peopl, including myself, could relate to this. I'm exactly the same.

That sounds like one of my mind arguments - I hate him. I LOVE HIM!

:)

This, THIS is why I hate fictionpress. You have spent lots of time and have posted 40 chapters, putting aside the size of each, and you have five reviews. Well, by the end of me reading this, I would like to see a double figure. Here goes...

Wow, I love this story! I love the way you wrote the whole story, very simple. It's very nice.

ahaha i like the ending but poor chris :( i liked him :P great story, i love it!

oh gosh, i love this so far :) your concept is amazing
update soon!!

Aw, why :O
Why did he do that!
I love your story.
It`s well written. ;)
And update again soon, !^^

This is an awesome story which definitely deserves more reviews! The emotions and voice of the narrator, the non-traditional format of the chapters (the simplicity of some of the chapters certainly packs a punch), all combine to create a wonderful story. Keep it up :)