I really like this piece. Well done.

i liked this piece, especially:

Realistically, love is never like it is in the movies. And I’ve come to realise that, slowly.

Realistically, it will all end. Sooner than you expected.

i also how despite the fact that the character knows this they can't help but to fall for the "act" so to speak.

it good and realistic for me at least

keep it up

I think this is one of those pieces that goes beyond "passionate" and "angsty" and is just . . . exhausted. Not saying it's a tired piece, of course, but just that the narrator is done being passionate and is just resigned. It's bitter, of course, but it's something that's so cynical that it's still really emotional, but what makes it emotional is the lack of emotion. If that makes any sense. Forgive me; when I get in creative moods, I tend to not make a whole lot of sense. Keep writing! :)

i enjoyed it, it reminded me a lot of how great gatsby treated the whole love business :]

Henceforth why I decided to review this on a Tuesday. (:

This was honestly sweet but not in that gooey thick swab of honey sort of way... more along the lines of spoonfuls of sugar added to dampen the bitter taste of coffee sweet. So with that said, I taste a subtle sip of cynicism hidden within the words. The lines are compelling, but I can't help to lose myself in the depth of the aroma.

Lovely.

the repetition works well... nice. =)