 rawrchelle 2008-12-13 . chapter 1Huh. I didn't expect you to post this on FictionPress. XD
Well, for one, I liked the different tenses of the "I love you"s. I thought this could be put under romance, though, since it's clearly that...-shrugs- But this works too, haha.
When I read this, I think Shirley. So I wouldn't know what a normal reader would think, if he wasn't presented with Code Geass. Maybe it wouldn't make sense. (But judging from the previous review, I don't think so. Just a little food for your thoughts.)
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P.S. Oh, and I throroughly enjoyed the dashes being able to work properly. XD |