Love, love, LOVE it!

I havent been on fp in a while and this was the first story I read since being back. This story is a gift to my senses--wasn't cliched, wasn't dry (LOL cos of the rain, get it?! okay... shutting up lameness) and it wasn't all lovey-dovey.


Why can't I ever meet people that way? ;.(


Keep up the great work!


Sage

Very cute. Well written too. I like Luke. He's got a personality which is getting rarer and rarer in these waters. Jeremy's a little more cliche, but hey, it's well done and he's likable, which again is a rarity in itself. Though, I may be biased, he shares my little bro's name ^-^

This was amazing! Cute, Fluffy, and Funny.

Nice combo!

aw! that was adorable and awesome and...i think i love your characters...i wish this wasn't just a one-shot. because i'd love to know more about luke and jeremy.

D'aaw. So sweet. I luff it.

wow i loved this...and i dont even like pancakes. :)

well, i have now read this story twice, and i must tell you that i love it. i really do. it's short and sweet and just perfect for what you were trying to do. i have no idea what contest you were writing this for, but that doesn't matter. all that matters is that you're brilliant and this is wonderful.

--kyra

that was really good! :)
I am terrible at comforting people I just get all awkward and ditzy like '... there there, lol, erm' so if this situation happened I would be fucked and let the goth boy get away :( phantasmagoria are funky btw ;]

aw. how sweet. i like it.