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PancakesAndCoffee 2009-11-08 . chapter 20
I love this collection, especially "Cake" and "Be Your Thinspiration". The simplicity of your poems make the impact on the reader even bigger. Great job!
Mioto 2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Your poems are moving, no doubt.

But you might want to change the name at the very last bit. "Loli." Loli is a slang term used on the internet for Lolita, which is referring to a book in which a man falls in love with a young girl. Girls that are called lolis are in child **, or in hentai depicting child **.

Seems an innocent name. 'Tis not.
Natural and fake beauty 2009-10-24 . chapter 17
this almost made me cry because i know people that would actually trya nd do this.
Natural and fake beauty 2009-09-28 . chapter 16
i showed these to my friend and she was tearing up. so keep them coming.
speakeasy-love 2009-09-08 . chapter 1
I’m not anorexic, per say, but I completely understand. my interest in food is similar to my interest in tar production. slim to none.
I enjoyed reading this collection. its an old subject that little said about.
if that makes any sense.
-speakeasy
so i sing to the stars 2009-09-07 . chapter 15
This is definitely my favorite from your Starved collection by far. Once again, I have nothing to smart to say but just know I thought this was reallyreallyreally well written.
writingpistachio 2009-09-07 . chapter 13
I love this collection! So witty, so fresh.
heart'sespionage 2009-08-10 . chapter 1
this collection is really good, lots of wit. i couldn't stop racing through
Little girl Big world 2009-04-26 . chapter 13
These were all great poems. I liked Cake the best. Nice job
Dreaming Heavens 2009-04-08 . chapter 10
I think you're developing as a writer.
And the more you grow (up) as a person, the better you're writing gets. Thanks for posting :)
Natural and fake beauty 2009-03-21 . chapter 12
amazing
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