I love this collection, especially "Cake" and "Be Your Thinspiration". The simplicity of your poems make the impact on the reader even bigger. Great job!

Your poems are moving, no doubt.

But you might want to change the name at the very last bit. "Loli." Loli is a slang term used on the internet for Lolita, which is referring to a book in which a man falls in love with a young girl. Girls that are called lolis are in child **, or in hentai depicting child **.

Seems an innocent name. 'Tis not.

this almost made me cry because i know people that would actually trya nd do this.

i showed these to my friend and she was tearing up. so keep them coming.

I’m not anorexic, per say, but I completely understand. my interest in food is similar to my interest in tar production. slim to none.
I enjoyed reading this collection. its an old subject that little said about.
if that makes any sense.
-speakeasy

This is definitely my favorite from your Starved collection by far. Once again, I have nothing to smart to say but just know I thought this was reallyreallyreally well written.

I love this collection! So witty, so fresh.

this collection is really good, lots of wit. i couldn't stop racing through

These were all great poems. I liked Cake the best. Nice job

I think you're developing as a writer.
And the more you grow (up) as a person, the better you're writing gets. Thanks for posting :)

amazing