Awww! That was short and sweet and funny D
Love It!

That ending was funny! Hahaha :P

Wow... surprisingly, I really like this :D great writing! I love how unconventional the guy is :) this would make a brilliant full length story... *hint hint*

LOL I'm kidding. But anyway, great story :D

so cute! loved it but one thing, the boxers and bunny slippers didnt make sense when he handed her his jacket

lol i just found this and i've got to say i love it...theres just something about it...its down right adorable lol...defo going in my favourites hehe !

hahaha i like the last part hahaha

its cute and...um?

well i like it hahahaha

i really liked! he's much better than the average clichéd prince charming!

charlotte

I love it! It's great how you combined the fairy tales and real life. I had good laughs when I read this. It was sweet.

-laughs- That's great. It really shows the dynamics of a relationship; how they're not all fariy-tales and the like. That your prince can be the opposite of what everyone expects.

I really love this. I hope you continue it!

x

Addy

lol that's funny XD

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA that is highly amusing. was that a one-shot or is this going to be an actual story cause if it is i will prolly be entertained for hours...good job.

this is cool. and funny. continue?

Aww its cute! Loved it! )

I love the story.

its simply adorable(:

Hehe, this was cute.

It's a perfect little short story of that guy who's a little awkward with his girl (that's the way I see it), the badass who doesn't know how to be sweet P Adorable