wow, I love it. You should really continue writing more chapters, I'll be checking to see if you update soon.

When I saw the description I thought it sounds interesting, and now that I've read it I can honestly say It is a really good chapter, I'm glad I choose this story it has lots of potential. n_n

Ah! Buddy!
You need to work on your grammar. lol
But yeah. This is good! Can I have more? Pretty please? :P
Anyhow, I'm going to send you an email with corrections, cause they're a little too long to post here, plus I can use color that way. XD